Day 26 of The Year Apart (and Sometimes Not)

Today’s Challenge (from Charles):

Write a triversen poem.

Originally conceived by William Carlos Williams.

Here is how it works.

 

Here is Charles' poem:

“La Gruta”

The elastic had worn away

but the band remained dangling

loosely from her spindled wrist.

 

Dancers pouring meaning into

melodramas made for television

had given her Thursday nights purpose.

 

She ignored the on-screen advice of

doctors wearing blush and scrubs

whose words were like fried Inka corn.

 

Eyeing the cream as it swam throughout

the steaming black bean-tea like a white gown

dipped, dancing, a hot mug of Havana.

 

Her bloated frame betrayed an impassioned

drive to immobilize her body

that once floated in a heavenward glide.

 

That night, her night, in an endless rumba

in the arms of a golden-blooded panther

the only relic: a worn elastic band.

 

Here is Davis' poem:

“god”

driving home to my love,

i reflect on beer-fueled revelations

with strangers on birthdays.

 

how can it be that

no matter where i go

i can still find the depth we call god?

 

i supposed there exists

a certain inescapability

to this phenomenon of everything.

 

i’ve come to love this thing

that follows me wherever i go

and never leaves me quite alone.

 

this thing from which i hide

my darkest secrets and yet keeps me

from the scope of my shame.

 

any good friend would do that

and i guess i don’t mind a friend

who is truly always there.